[personal profile] ellster_kyle
It's always still raining
Back in November.
I can reset the scene at
Will, and against it.
Sisyphos's punishment
Unjustly passed to
You. I'd have dropped
Everything to join the
Strain if I'd
Noticed. I never got the
Chance to help you appreciate
Fall. Now I hate it,
Too.

Date: 2018-10-03 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] bellatrixe
I love the atmosphere in this

Date: 2018-10-04 12:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fausts_dream
Always nice to see poetry on Idol, well done.

Date: 2018-10-04 10:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] rayaso
I agree - it is always nice to see poetry. This was very concise and evocative. Well done!

Date: 2018-10-05 11:56 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] the_eternal_overthinker
Great Imagery! It went like a loop as I re-read it by the time I finished. Concise and well written! Kudos!

Date: 2018-10-07 01:33 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thephantomq
The tone of this is well done. :)

Date: 2018-10-07 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] tatdatcm
<3 Love your poetry. I hope it's providing catharsis. *hugs*

Date: 2018-10-07 07:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] adoptedwriter
Few words but many deep emotions and thoughts. Hugs.

Date: 2018-10-08 06:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] murielle
And Fall deserves to be appreciated!

Well done!

Date: 2018-10-08 07:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bewize
So sad.

Date: 2018-10-08 07:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] troof_therry
I really like poems in this competition and especially poems that are this tight. Even an allusion to a tragic figure to illuminate the core struggle here, which really winds up feeling like lost seasons. I love it.

Date: 2018-10-08 08:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] megatronix
Oh wow. So short and so sad. Very well written!

Date: 2018-10-08 10:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] moretta
Love the slightly off cadence of this. Very nice.

Date: 2018-10-09 02:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dmousey
Broody and moody. Just the way I feel right now. ✌💜😊

Date: 2018-10-09 07:30 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] favoritebean_writes
This is very nicely done.

Date: 2018-10-09 07:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] halfshellvenus
I liked this very much. Snappy and concise -- and concise is rare for you!

By November, all of Fall's charms are gone in most places. Gray without the beauty of winter, and it is then that the slog begins...

Date: 2018-10-09 08:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] flipflop_diva
So much emotion in such a short piece. Great job!
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